If i were you and (im a smoker too) and if this were me, i'd buy a whole carton of maybe the soft pack so it fits better instead of the box of cigs. and break open the carton and stash packs here and there throughout my bag so its not one big carton, its single packs stashed throughout your bag...
i think it's very powerful. very good word usage. sounds like a rap i think. like, when i was reading this i could hear a beat in the background in my head. I think your troubles in your life have empowered you and inspired you to be a great poet. no matter how dark and sad a poem might be, its...