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  1. K

    Would you rate my poem about the Holocaust?

    Such a great poem, putting yourself into another, simply genius. Everything fell together perfectly, and the ending gave me a great sense of closure. The Holocaust was a period of grief for everyone, not only the Jews. Many people were against them, yet they ceased to surrender. The poem is...
  2. K

    Comment on another poem.......?

    I didn't think it was really good, but it was poetry at the very least. The poem fails to give me much detail of what's happening, what do you feel? I don't want you to just tell me what you do, I want to know what's happening in the characters head! This poem... is like only a scrape on the...
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