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  1. K

    what do you think of my poem about anorexia?

    it's not the kind of problem that can be solved there is no cure nobody can stop it and it will end me at first it seems like an easy fix it's a warm smile that says come in you're always welcome once it has you're soul and self control... you cannot stop it it has it's role. i will die.it will...
  2. K

    what do you think of my poem and be critical?

    ya really good but in the end you made too much about you and it got confusing when you moved around topics a lot it was like you were just making it up on the spot like you put almost no effort in the editing portio but still very good or a ruff draft you have so many ideas so it seems like...
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