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    Care to comment on these lyrics I wrote?

    As of yet, And It All( working title possibly may change) Verse one: You could of had it all Or are you too small? Is it all too much Do you ever stand tall? You could of found it all To be a joke Could you in the meanwhile Give up your ghosts Morning blooms And the oceans sing...
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    What do you think of this free verse poem I wrote?

    Free Search: Delusion Corporate shame Red sky Of lights Woman to Crying names Slave chant Rebellions In paved broke way Tear of blood On her heart, her mind Still crucifix statue lights Candle lit The crowing fragile Shell shock Of souls American sunrise Solidifies Stoic and brave Wild...
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    What do you think of this short free verse poem I wrote?

    Stoned In the overthrows With cruelties Arising from The open spades And evil leers Dejections Madly and horrific In the eyes Of the Worldly mass Detuned space Two suns At bay In the stones They throw Birthed To the rustic Tragedies, majestic Smooth bodied ills Solidified sunrises On...
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    What do you think of this free verse poem I wrote?

    So I'm not sure if this poem is quite finished or not yet I figured I'd post it on here to see what other people think of it. Untitled as of yet Men in shambles With their eyes In speechless Voids I see them With disgust In pity On authorities Paper mâchés Into broken sunlight They...
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    What do you of this song thing I wrote?

    Fallen roman empire Verese 1 A man screaming from his place Oh take these souls away And place them in a dirt ridden case His knees collapse to the ground Saying who's got me caught in a knot His elbows themselves out of his eyes Even though he's waiting to rot I've got angels dust sprinkled...
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