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    Any thoughts on this poem? Critism is appreciated?

    very good but too many clever words try to make it a little bit simpler, shorter, sharper
  2. J

    Any thoughts on this poem? Critism is appreciated?

    very good but too many clever words try to make it a little bit simpler, shorter, sharper
  3. J

    Any thoughts on this poem? Critism is appreciated?

    very good but too many clever words try to make it a little bit simpler, shorter, sharper
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