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    feedback on this poem would be greatly appreciated- its in ballad format, a tad...

    ...out of date now however? The Delhi Commonwealth Games (a ballad of) "It's modelled on the New York Bronx" the organisers claim There's water dripping through the roof The bridge fell down again The toilets aren't exactly good the builders know of it That's why in every athletes room there's...
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    feedback on this poem would be greatly appreciated- its in ballad format, a tad...

    ...out of date now however? The Delhi Commonwealth Games (a ballad of) "It's modelled on the New York Bronx" the organisers claim There's water dripping through the roof The bridge fell down again The toilets aren't exactly good the builders know of it That's why in every athletes room there's...
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