There are a couple of ways
1) Look at the acknowledgments of your favorite books, or do a search to try to find your favorite author's agent. (If that author has written a book that's at least somewhat similar to your own, in terms of genre or audience). Then look that agent up online. Every...
What is happening?
This is dialogue and action without any kind of "grounding" whatsoever. I have no idea where I am or what's going on. At first I thought they may be skydiving, with how extreme the description of cold and wind were. So then they're waiting in line for a night club, and...