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    99 Percent Of Yahoo Poetry Critics are Morons?

    Really, all of you in your pretentious cliched mannor. Commenting on pure garbage as if its some sweet melody. You know nothing of poetry nor how to judge beauty in words.Pain in outnumbering promise throughout 9/ 10 of each of these poems shows how stupid most of you are. Sorry for the...
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    what do you think of my poem?

    Hot faucet, Leaking out colors A drop of blue slash some red collect the geen She never fell asleep for good Her carefully committed trance played images in haunting dance the beads of the nights great death dropped, forgivingly, into her luxuriant breath as the windows thrashed open laying...
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    Poetry section is very apathetic, help me figure out the kinks of this poem i wrote?

    Flashing lights so bright We shot thru the night Running, soft and swift The journey into light Was one without sight Careless eyelids are forgot In this twilight we were brought Hold me until the clouds stop bleeding surrender our ego's into pools of great disillusion my true love waits...
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    First time on here, going to post a somewhat longer poem of mine , I would

    like feedback if thats possible? Sensations run shocking my vains of disbelief In great fields of forsaken morals we found our true love He sat their bleeding rivers and roses of red ecstasy He looked pale and forgotten yet this is what he wanted He looked pale and forgotten yet this is how he...
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