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Within a Galaxy Of all the kids looking for their gifts to give Beside parents wishing for new lives to live Of all the pale young faces in clouds that smile Above the inkblots that are scared and hostile Of all the eyes going wild during a dream Seeing their lost lives they hope to redeem Of...

I can't directly draw what they describe in the poem, so I'm not what sure what to do. The more abstract, the better. I think its going to look like crap. It says "The end result shouldnt be a direct illustration of the events or subject matter of the poem but a psychological parallel to the...

Very good.

Very good.