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    Coronor...a free verse poem...what do you think?

    Again a hard subject! Impressive approach, but why? Why is poetry dead? It reminds me of lyrics from good new wave groups. The 2nd strophe is the better one! I try to approach it from your point of view, still, I think you are overconfident of your poetic ability and you challenge unexplored...
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    Coronor...a free verse poem...what do you think?

    Again a hard subject! Impressive approach, but why? Why is poetry dead? It reminds me of lyrics from good new wave groups. The 2nd strophe is the better one! I try to approach it from your point of view, still, I think you are overconfident of your poetic ability and you challenge unexplored...
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    Coronor...a free verse poem...what do you think?

    Again a hard subject! Impressive approach, but why? Why is poetry dead? It reminds me of lyrics from good new wave groups. The 2nd strophe is the better one! I try to approach it from your point of view, still, I think you are overconfident of your poetic ability and you challenge unexplored...
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    Coronor...a free verse poem...what do you think?

    Again a hard subject! Impressive approach, but why? Why is poetry dead? It reminds me of lyrics from good new wave groups. The 2nd strophe is the better one! I try to approach it from your point of view, still, I think you are overconfident of your poetic ability and you challenge unexplored...
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    Coronor...a free verse poem...what do you think?

    Again a hard subject! Impressive approach, but why? Why is poetry dead? It reminds me of lyrics from good new wave groups. The 2nd strophe is the better one! I try to approach it from your point of view, still, I think you are overconfident of your poetic ability and you challenge unexplored...
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    Coronor...a free verse poem...what do you think?

    Again a hard subject! Impressive approach, but why? Why is poetry dead? It reminds me of lyrics from good new wave groups. The 2nd strophe is the better one! I try to approach it from your point of view, still, I think you are overconfident of your poetic ability and you challenge unexplored...
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    If you could trade places with any of the poets in this section for a day, who...

    As a male, I can refer to males with more accuracy: 1. mtheory 2. Gene 3. HH 4. Fred 5. Himedal I consider them to have something compatible to my way of thinking. Complicated also unexplored. Among women: 1. Damsy Blues 2. LoveChild 3. HumptyDumpty 4. Kirby 5. Doe 6. Elys Interesting femmes...
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    [Impetus of sinners] (Only a Poem c/c)?

    [Impetus of sinners] My eyes were not able to stare, actions delayed or ceased a kissed bit of neck, a response's lift, a caress long missed Almost of a perjurer of my prime, odd self, a hesitant whiz a cross birth of desires - a fence of abandonment, a drizzle of sea foam or tears! Of even...
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    [Impetus of sinners] (Only a Poem c/c)?

    [Impetus of sinners] My eyes were not able to stare, actions delayed or ceased a kissed bit of neck, a response's lift, a caress long missed Almost of a perjurer of my prime, odd self, a hesitant whiz a cross birth of desires - a fence of abandonment, a drizzle of sea foam or tears! Of even...
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    Would you comment on these limericks?

    As I enjoyed my Brie of cheese Damsy's little kitten suffered of fleas Silent enjoyed Green tasty peas Elys's roosters vacanced in Greece
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    Would you comment on these limericks?

    As I enjoyed my Brie of cheese Damsy's little kitten suffered of fleas Silent enjoyed Green tasty peas Elys's roosters vacanced in Greece
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    My almost-sonnet...? c/c this repost please?

    Very bold. Some secret wrath of the author maybe in there? Excellent advanced vocabulary. A Masochist with a capital M? Is he some kind of deity? If you are practicing to express oracles, prepare me 1 hour before to decode. As a priestess you marvel. I am used to this style of yours, every now...
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