hey
im a year 12 student
my english writing skills are pretty crap and i want to make sure this essay isnt..
so what im asking is for you to read my essay (its only half done) give me feedback and rate it
thanks :)
Ding-Dong. The school bell rings. A stampede of students come rushing through...
i think you should get either a metalic bluey-silvery coulour, paint your hole room white since there are so many colours or stick a plain wallpaper with a simple but hot design on it; and no im talking about the antique looking ugly wallpapers, there are new very modern ones.