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    I'm a new poet, trying to get off to a strong start?

    Please go easy with the comments, this is just off the top of my head Title: The invisible crush For years it seems that I have been invisible Because if you knew me I would be visible When I see her my heart gets butterflies When she smiles her teeth leads me to her eyes Her eyes are...
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    Trying to improve my poetry (love poetry)?

    Please go easy with the comments, this is just off the top of my head Title: The invisible crush For years it seems that I have been invisible Because if you knew me I would be visible When I see her my heart gets butterflies When she smiles her teeth leads me to her eyes Her eyes are...
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    Any advice to help progress my writing?

    I am a: Guitar player, singer, song writer, and poet. As of right now I'm struggling with my poetry and was just wondering, do you find poetry more convincing when it rhymes, or doesn't rhyme? By the way, pretty much all of my songs are about love, broken hearts, and new starts
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    Any advice to help progress my writing?

    I am a: Guitar player, singer, song writer, and poet. As of right now I'm struggling with my poetry and was just wondering, do you find poetry more convincing when it rhymes, or doesn't rhyme? By the way, pretty much all of my songs are about love, broken hearts, and new starts
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