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    Dancing Amonst the Shade. Please critique?

    Dancing Amongst the Shade Love was a faucet made of gold In the summer’s early sunshine-- A girl whose fortune was untold Lying on a distant cloud nine. Dancing amongst the blacktop’s heat, Wearing a partially ripped dress Clouds parted for her quickened feet Sun arousing her tender breast...
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    Dancing Amongst the Shade, Comments?

    Dancing Amongst the Shade Love was a faucet made of gold In the summer’s early sunshine-- A girl whose fortune was untold Lying on a distant cloud nine. Dancing amongst the blacktop’s heat, Wearing a partially ripped dress Clouds parted for her quickened feet Sun arousing her tender breast...
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    I Confess, a Poem. What do you think?

    I Confess I confess. I am a sinner. I have walked into the darkness, And I have came back into light. Things I have seen and done Will never leave my thoughts alone. I’ve seen the utmost deception of Man. Killing and stealing. Raping And Depraving. We are all one. And I have seen the...
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    Calling all established and budding poets. Which is the first poem that inspired your...

    "Acquainted with the Night" by Robert Frost. It first showed me the overwhelming darkness within his soul. I could relate.
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