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    What do you think of this poem?

    I'm 16 and I wrote this recently it's still kind of just a draft. I want really honest opinons please, and some feedback if you'd like =] Still no title When he has ideas, I have work When they have ideas, we have work If it doesn't come with a letter grade, he doesn't care If it doesn't make...
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    how do you interpret this poem?

    When he has ideas, I have work When they have ideas, we have work If it doesn't come with a letter grade, he doesn't care If it doesn't make them money, they don't care If it's convenient for him, feelings don't matter If it's convenient for them, feelings don't matter We can't rebel- we've been...
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