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    I want to know if the story-line for my book sounds good. ?

    My book is about this girl named Annabelle who has the 'perfect' life; great family, tons of friends, great boyfriend, awesome grades, and good looks. Then a new boy named Gatlin moves into town and he is the total opposite. His dad is in prison, his mom is an alcoholic and pill popper, he could...
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    Am I a good writer? Be as critical as you have to but keep in mind I wrote that

    in literally 5 minutes. ? Annabelle sat up straight in her bed screaming so piercing it made the hair on my arms stand up. I rolled over, wrapped my arm around her waist and pulled her back into the bed next to me. This was the third night in the row she had started screaming like this but when...
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    My dog whines all the time!?

    My dog whines almost 24/7! He drives me crazy. If you look at him, when you pull up, when another dog is around, when you pet him, when you don't pet him, etc. Why? I don't understand?
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