Recent content by chocolateluvr4ever

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    What do you think of my poem?

    I love how the pace flows. The tone manages to change without jarring the reader. A very interesting and creative poem. Keep writing!
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    Hands and feet comment my poem please!!!?

    I really like it! It's simple, but manages to be deep at the same time. I find it amazing that so much can be said in so few words. Good work! I think this is one of my favorite poems I've seen on here.
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    New poem comments requested?

    Very...different. I'm curious as to the tone you were trying to set with this poem?
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