I wrote this when I was 13. I had recently read 'Macbeth' and a few short stories by H.P. Lovercraft and wanted to try my hand at poetry... Not brilliant, but I would appreciate opinions. Much Thanks.
Ode to the Shepherdess
Far from mountains
Where the jetty raven sings
Far from crystal lakes...
Ode to the Shepherdess, lol
Far from mountains
Where the jetty raven sings
Far from crystal lakes
where arched birds beet their ivory wings
Sits an hamlet of darkness and woe
Where by day its inhabitants sleep
And by night; the only light
Is that of the Shepherdess and her thousand sheep
I...