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    What do you think of the book I'm writing...?

    i only read the first 3 lines but first of all change his last name. cullen is a very unoriginal name. #2 you need to make the girl more like 16 and the guy more like 25. b/c 24 years is just a little too much and 14 is a little too young to fall in love with such an older man
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