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    Do you experience chest pain with acid reflux?

    I have severe pain on my sternum. It is even sore to touch. I had bad relux several years ago and it went away. It has recently come back with a vengeance. I'm taking 40 mg per day of Nexium. It helped for a little while but now is back. No rhyme or reason to it. Not worse at night...
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    How would you edit this chapter? word it, or even correct it if you feel the need to?

    Chapter One – The Funeral "He's here, He will always be". I convinced myself, knowing he was not able to hear me. It was twilight. The diffused light on the horizon reflected in the lake next to my town. It was going to rain. The puffy clouds started huddling around the sun as they refracted...
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    The Creation Of My Novel's Protagonist - In Progress , How Is It So Far?

    The plot has not been developed yet. I just wanted to describe the creation of the protagonist, a sort of picturesque novel. People here claimed it was boring as there was nothing but descriptions, but this is what I wanted to make. The decision to begin the novel with the discovery of his new...
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    Would You Purchase This Book If It Got Published?

    I did not remember what had happened last night, the events I was a witness to had happened coincidentally that I was sure nobody would have believed me if I had decided to report. A day later, everything was just in order, the trees were not broken, and no civilian was eaten alive. I ran...
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