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    B&A: The beginning of my short story. Comment and critique?

    It's a true short story I'm writing for a writing contest. I've posted it here a few times before, but it's a slightly updated version. Do you have any suggestions how to make it better? The deadline is tomorrow, so today is my last chance for editing and making it the best it can be. "All I...
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    Another random writing excercise?

    I'll give you the first sentence and you can carry on from there: "It was exhilarating, jumping off the Edge." Vague, I know, which is why I'm expecting some interesting answers. It's the beginning of my story and I'm curious as to what my fellow B&A writers will come up with :)
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    Help with my poem (it's short)?

    So I have to write a poem about 2 cents a meal, but I'm having trouble...here's what I have so far: A penny for bread, A penny for meat, A penny for ____ (food that rhymes with bread) A penny for ____ (food that rhymes with meat) A penny for hunger, To help world relief. I know it's not that...
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    A hopefully complicated and complex riddle...?

    My cousin told me this riddle and when I couldn't figure out the answer, he kept saying how stupid I was and that this was the easiest riddle ever. He kept saying how obvious the answer was, and when he finally told me what it was, it was definately not obvious...or at least I think so. So to...
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