Recent content by Bay Raymond

Ok...I know it doesn't flow right...but is it ok...? Running wild through endless Fields of shadows You who knows the truth Where your bare feet touch the ground Leaves a print For anyone to follow Heavy pounding behind you Yet you know to keep running Wind warning you to cease your step But...

sorry posted it to wrong section... With only the light from our candle, We venture on word into a world left for us Forlorn souls with no where to go Left in ruins A place once called home but now a community lost without a single trace We rove around with nothing more than a candle Forlorn...

ok I asked about this poem two times...sorry but those two times I forgot to ask is it good for school I don't want to make anyone think of depressing thoughts...or take the poem the wrong way.... With only the light from our candle, We venture on word into a world left for us Forlorn souls...

With only the light from our candle, We venture onword into a world left for us Forlorn souls with no where to go Left in ruins A place once called home but now a community lost without a single trace We rove around with nothing more than a candle Forlorn souls sining a song 'bout plentiful...

Well there's this new dandy thing on the internet...It's called google... (Sorry for being rude...I just wanted to see how it felt to be rude for once...Not a good feeling)

I just want to see what other people think about the poem...(The meaning) well here goes, With only the light from our candle, We venture on word into a world left for us Forlorn souls with no where to go Left in ruins A place once called home but now a community lost without a single trace We...

Beyond broken dreams There's a river It's just as it seems A river nothing more But chilly air making you shiver Yet if you look beyond you will see All of your dreams awaiting you If you don't give up on hope You will find your heart's true desire And what could that be Only you know you And...

He probably still likes you but a little hurt even preppy popular people have feelings...(no offense to anyone...I'm preppyish...not popular...just saying)

To me it was ok....