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    Need Help With This Scene I'm Writing? Does It Sound Ok?

    Heya guys!! Ok, so in one of my previous question, I asked for help with showing not telling. Well, i was wondering how this sounds? My character Ryan (she's a girl) is pushing herself to the absolute limit. She's a Hip Hop Dancer and she's recently got some bad news which has sent her...
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    Does This Description Sound OK?

    Heya, guys! ok, I just need a bit of help with if these descriptions give you a clear picture as to what the characters look like? they're the main characters best friends. ok, here's the snippet from my introduction! First friend On the left was Twin 1, or better known as Kaya, was looking at...
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    Limewire Not Working?

    Ok, so i try downloading songs on limewire (version 4.12.15) and it loads up and all that but when i try to search for a song it comes up with "Limewire is currently connecting to the network. Your search my not return many results until you are fully conneted to the network." so i click ok...
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