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    Please rate my poetry and give your comments and suggestions.?

    i dont really like it sorry... keep trying you have that potential
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    Please rate my poetry and give your comments and suggestions.?

    i dont really like it sorry... keep trying you have that potential
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    critique my poem please?

    sit back and wave to the ocean, watch the sun go in motion. get up and feel the warm air, look back and see if i care. my eyes shine up in the sky, watch the sun go bye-bye, sit down and look out the window, I see cars, lights, and wind-blow. maybe if you go to that place, You'll see me...
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