i have this best friend who is really supportive. she calls me the pretty girl, and she's the one putting attention on me. now, two days ago, she gave me this keychain jersey with the number 18. i thanked her for it. the next day she was really quiet and was ignoring me. i kept calling her name...
Well, when you're writing, you want to make the reader feel like they know the characters very well. Detail is important because you want the reader to make an image in their mind like a little movie.
For the first chapter or the preface (the preface is optional) you want to confuse the reader...