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    Exploring the laws of nature. Will you comment please?

    Oh wow.... ^_^" I like the second stanza best, the last two lines in particular. I thought the whole thing was good, though it switched rhythm a bit suddenly. Other than that, the flow was good and had a nice rhyme scheme. It brought me memories of all the barns I've been in, and the *ahem*...
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